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Post by Guest Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:30 pm


Björn woke from his sleep, annoyed, irritated and feeling sick...which made him even more angry. His arms felt like they were weighed down by steel and his throat was dry and scratchy. Björn growled to himself and blinked furiously at the darkness in front of him...he could see the faint glimmer of his great axe ahead, tantalisingley out of reach, since when he went to grab in he discovered he was chained, metal cuffs and links around his wrists, binding him to the floor. Anger boiling over, he pulled hard upwards on his left restraint, not caring that he was probably going to snap his wrist. When the base of the metal made no more noise than a objective groan, Björn fumed and pulled himself into a crouch, his shoulders squared and his head raised defiantly and his overall look was aggressive. "FILTHY GREEKS!!" he roared, remembering the man who knocked him out before he had woken here, the man who sported strange, foreign wear. What did his smug face say his name was again..Ares? "VILE, COWARDLY GRECIAN DOGS!! LET ME OUT!!" Pulling again on the chains, the metal links started to creak and become undone...thats it just a little more...A ungodly white face peered round the corner of Björn's 'room' in the labyrinth dungeon and it made a scream/gurgle as it thought it sensed another helpless person who had wandered down here by accident. Ulfr huffed with the effort of pulling himself free but did notice the strange monster that had crawled its way into the same vicinity as him.

Locking his jaw and clenching his teeth so hard that a little crack appeared in his wisdom tooth Björn ripped free of the weaker left chain and swung round for the thing, an evil, malicous glimmer in his icy eyes as he gripped its skull and slowly pushed it into the wall, smiling wickedly as the critters fragile skull began to crack and give under the pressure and its strange blood and gore seeped in between his fingers. Pushing it into the wall even when it was well and truly dead, Björn swept it down the wall, painting the stones with the fresh blood before throwing the useless, destroyed monster to the floor like a broken doll and leaned forward for his axe that was almost within reach.

He grabbed the handle with a bloodied hand after feeling his shoulder dislocate after the battle of him leaning forward and the strength of the right restraint. The great-axe was indeed great, it was a little taller than him (just a little) and Björn himself was 6'4" but he held the weapon easily, casually even...must have been all that training. Taking aim and slicing through the steel with an awful noise Björn stumbled forward, monster blood dripping off the weapon handle, his hand and his face and severed restraints looped around his wrists, he walked forward confidently, the heavy axe laid on his shoulder as he kept his eyes forward. A wicked, evil smirk on his face, icy eyes twinkling with venom and malice, just daring any other monsters to jump him.

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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:17 pm

((This is freakin intense! owo Awesome work! You're such a great storyteller. Can't wait to see this guy! Where's he from? ))
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Post by Eos Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:21 pm

Eos: D: do... do I have to teach that thing?
Me: probably.
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Post by Guest Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:23 pm

((But it I tell you were he's from it'll give him away =3=
Thank you for the complements, your so good to me bawwwww Razz I feel so speshal xD
Oh yeh, your soooo teaching that thing xD
???: Get out of my way, or I'll sharpen my axe on your face!
Me: T_T but..but
???: *raises axe*
Me: *flee's* I'm scared of my own creations what have I done?!?!

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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:28 pm

((*Is Loling like a tard* I only say the truth. X3 I always enjoy your posts very much. Heck, half the stuff Jack says has me either cringing in pain from hi pain, or laughing my butt off at his silliness XD Soooo much fun))
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Post by Guest Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:05 am

((8D again this is me 8D feelin' speshal at 3 in the morning xD but I'm having a lie in tommorow so its all good xD
Well I aim to please Razz What can I say *shrugs* I like tottally ooze awesome
???: *glares with his perma-frown*
Me: What...*is scared* its called sarcasm...please don't hurt me

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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:08 am

((I must agree with that. ??? is a bit scawy o3o AWESOME 8DD Good hevens its late where you are! Its only 8pm here... though I'm usually up till 3 or 4 myself XD))
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Post by Guest Sat Jan 22, 2011 10:02 am

((This made me curious D: It looks so interesting owo))

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 22, 2011 2:10 pm

(( OH I JUUUUST CAN'T WAAAAIT TO BE KIIIIING
That's what the title did to me xD

Pfft I tree him, he seems to be a monster, and we all tree monsters (Ruairi's still taller though 8D). He's obvisouly not Greek, but from a place that was close enough to Greece to know what Greeks are, hm, interesting. Definitely can't wait to meet him).)

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 22, 2011 2:12 pm

((hehe he doesn't come from near greece exactly but he travelled around a lot xD I was gonna make him persian but I'm juggling two idea's Very Happy))

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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Sat Jan 22, 2011 3:48 pm

((Dang is Suus.... now I'm gonna be singing that aaaaaaall day =3=.... in an annoying childish voice to tick off my brothers XD))
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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:03 pm

Adonia stubled down the dark, damp hallways of the dungeon scolding herself mightily. She definitely recognized this place, if not by the "charming" decor, then by the smell. Such a scent should not be allowed on Earth, in Heaven, or even in Hell, she thought to herself, wrinkling her nose in disgust - a small wavering flame fluttering above one of her hands to help her see.

As she continued along, still chiding herself or getting lost again, she heard an ungodly roar coming from somewhere down the halls. The evil sound lingered, echoing all around her for at least a full minute before finally fading into complete silence, leaving the poor siren shaken beyond belief and rooted to the spot.

She remembered her last encounter in the dungeon... Eos had been there to help her.... but he was angry with her. She wouldn't be relying on him to help. At least she had her scythe this time...

After a minute or so, standing there and reminding her heart and lungs to continue functioning, her eyes began to scan the hall once more, trying to find the way out... before whatever had made that sound caught up with her. She squared her shoulders and began to tiptoe forward once more into the gloom.
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Post by Eos Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:09 pm

Eos scanned the floor of the dundeon. Searching for a black glove in the dark halls wasn't the easiest thing. But today he was feeling better and thought he could handle whatever the drak place could throw at him. He had his dory his sheild (on his back) and his xithos, knowing better than to walk into the dungeon unarmed.

"RWAAAAAAAR!!"

What the f- he thought as he heard an ungodly roar. He froze mid-step and looked around. He could either go back or move foward toward the noise. Curiosity got the best of him and he ran foward, almost bumping into some one as he turned the corner...

Addi, of course.
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Post by Guest Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:13 pm

Bjorn wandered down the winding hallways and corridors, dragging his great axe behind him, sharpening it on the floor, sparks flying from the grinding metal. He had no idea how long it had been or where he was, he wasn't bothered by the monstrosities that lurked in the shadows that jumped and quivered in fear of the tall Dane. Blood dripped and snaked from underneath the tight cuffs that he had broken free of and it was obvious that the pale skin underneath was rubbed raw. He could hear footsteps, small dainty footsteps and he placed his axe on his none dislocated shoulder with ease to avoid making noise. The viking traveled forwards, the trail of blood from former 'obstacles' trailing behind him in evil, dark smears on the floor and walls to stop him going back on himself. Maybe it was just another monster, maybe it was someone who knew how to get out...meh either way they would end up the same....

dead.

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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:18 pm

Addi nearly jumped out of her skin as a dark figure came screeching around the corner at a full run - the flame of her little fire flickering wildly as she lost concentration. A moment later, the fire steadied and she recognized the face of her teacher Eos.

Turning a bright red, she stuttered "Good day, sir" before turning on her heel and walking along the hall randomly in order to avoid looking at him and seeing that look of anger and hurt, he had left him with last.

As she turned the corner though, she encountered a wall... of man. A giant pale, blond man bearing a gigantic ax loomed above her. She squeaked in fear, flattening herself against the wall in an attempt to put some distance between herself and the giant of a man - the fire in her hand fluttering, dangerously close to going out.
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Post by Eos Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:23 pm

Eos walked after Addi, what was wrong with her? She refused to look at him and ran away down the hall.

"Addi, you're going to wrong way again," he let her know gently.

And then giant man of doom and thef@ck?!! !! He. Was. Really. Tall. Like a skyscraper. He had to be at least a head taller than Eos and towered over Addi.

((Eos is 5 feet and 11 inches... which is why the Spartans call him scrawny XDDD))
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Post by Guest Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:37 pm

((awww poor shorty scrawny spartan xDD Bjorn is 6'4"))

Bjorn snarled at the small female, his teeth stained red from blood. He must have looked a right state with the large purple bruise forming on his left shoulder.
"Hvor er jeg?" he growled and ignoring the male that skidded and hesitated at the corner, he stepped forward and latched a hand onto the strange blue creatures throat. She looked human but he had never seen a blue person before, not in all his travels.
"Hvor er jeg?" he repeated increasing the pressure, vicious cruel intent behind his eyes, his large axe held loosely in his other hand as if it only weighed a little.


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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:44 pm

Adonia just stared at the large man as he began to speak.... but she couldn't understand his words.

She opened her mouth to tell him as much, but the words wouldn't come. She just slid down the wall a fraction of an inch, swallowing hard before managing to breathe out "I-I'm sorry... I-I don't understand..."
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Post by Guest Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:51 pm

"forkert svar!" he snarled and hit the siren against the wall again, not too hard but it would cause bruising.

"Where am I women!" his voice was rough and harsh and filled with dangerous tones. He wouldn't let go until she gave him a answer, and h was still wondering whether or not he would kill her afterwards. He still hadn't forgotten about the male in the vicinty but he wasn't too fussed, he could be added to the 'need to kill' list.

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Post by Eos Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:54 pm

((Eos: *pokes him with dory* Me: I'm sorry i really have no idea what to write... =3= ))
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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:56 pm

Adonia gasped as her back slammed into the wall, the large man's hand knocking the air from her lungs. With a shuddering gasp and a cough she managed to choke out "Y-you're in the d-dungeon of the Athenaeum of War! I don't know why I swear! I'm just lost down he-" she couldn't continue. The Dane's large hand was making it difficult for her to breathe.
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Post by Eos Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:04 pm

"Let her go," he snarled. Eos didn't enjoy it when people hurt Addi.
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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:24 pm

Adonia's eyes widened as she heard Eos' words. She tried to call to him to tell him not to provoke the man; but her vision was blurring from the lack of air, her hands pulling in vain against the tree-like limb of the man choking her.
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Post by Guest Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:54 pm

Hitting her one final time against the wall, he let go and his anger boiled over at the other mans tone, swinging the axe so that it skimmed just millimetres over the spartans head where it thudded into the stone wall, the stones cracking underneath the force of the axe's swing. The viking pryed it out of the wall and pushed the man forward.
"Take me out of here greek!" he demanded, stabbing the axe forward into the mans back lightly.

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Post by Achlys Adonia Argyris Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:01 pm

Adonia's vision exploded into white light for a moment as she was slammed against the wall once more. She collapsed in the floor choking and gasping for air for a moment, her body shaking from the trauma and her mind blank.

As her vision returned, she could see the large man pushing Eos along the hallway with his ax. She had to stand up and follow them or she might be wandering down here alone forever.

she carefully pushed herself, up using the wall to steady herself, little spots of white still floating in her vision, but her mind was starting to clear again.
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